Lword What IFs.......This is a featured page

The Characters;

Carmen – HOT ; Shane – The WoManIzer ; Jenny – The Lonely Lovely one ; Beth – Sophisticated Beauty ; Tina _ Beth’s pregnant girlfriend ; Dana _ The Popular Tennis Player ; Alice _ The Journalist/Talk show hostess and Dana’s girlfriend.

The scene is set, Carmen and Jenny are a couple but really Carmen wants to be with Shane and Shane wants Carmen but then there is Jenny Sweet Jenny. Carmen does not want to hurt Jenny’s feelings but Carmen also wants to teach Shane a lesson that she can’t be breaking women’s hearts and leaving them.

Shane the heart Breaker yes she’s a heart breaker, breaks hearts and leaves them hurting but things changed when Shane meet Carmen. She could not keep her mind off Carmen for one second and it really affects her when she see’s Carmen and Jenny together as a couple.

Jenny senses that Carmen is not all truthful with her feeling for her, deep down inside Jenny knows that Carmen really wants to be with Shane. Meanwhile Dana is jealous of Shane because she fines that Shane gets all the girls. “What does Shane have that I Don’t?” she asks her friends. All the same she plans to enjoy Shane’s lifestyle too. After all; she was a successful Tennis Player and women should be on her too.


(Here is the twist) Carmen plans to help Dana get the girls. Dana girlfriend does not like the new Dana and is mad at Carmen for even suggesting that she helps Dana gets girls and be more popular and confident. Little does anyone know that Dana really has a secret crush on Beth from the first time she met her but because Beth loves Tina and they just had a baby together and was trying to pick up the pieces of their broken relationship, Dana never pushed the issue but at friendly gartherings you could see Dana stealing glances at Beth to the point where she becomes really obsessed, with what she could never have. Meanwhile Shane decides that if she will ever get Carmen back she would have to make her hate Jenny. She planned to get Jenny to be unfaithful to Carmen then she could make her move. Little did she know that her effort only pushed Carmen further away from her.

THE POOL PARTY It was Beth and Tina’s get together at the pool party. They invited all their gay friends. It was at this party that Dana decided to make her move on Beth. After all she would have to make her move sometime and besides all Carmen taught her couldn’t just go to waste. She had to try it out. Party was in full gear. The ladies were laughing around the pool there was lots to drinks. I guess the drinks probably got to Shanes head but not long after Shane started to laugh and strip down to her underwear (the girl wears male underwear) and drives into the pool laughing. This caused a chain reaction about four other girls stripped and followed her laughing into the pool. Tina smiled at this and made a comment “ I didn’t know this was a striptease party” all the same they all were having the time of their lives. Shane started to kiss the girls in the pool …was this turning into one huge orgy? Maybe , maybe not. Jenny smiled to herself then jumped into the pool, for one moment Shane froze surprised but Jenny went up to her seductively and laid one hot wet kiss on Shane. When Carmen saw this she didn’t like it one bit. The others were to busy laughing and cheering Jenny on to notice how hurt Carmen was. It was at that moment Dana made her move on the surprised Beth.

Beth had just got up from her chair to go get a drink and look in on the little one who lay fast asleep in her room. “I’m going to look in on the baby” she whispered in Tina’s ear. Tina nodded her head in approval and continued to look on smilingly at the already growing orgy in the pool. Shane and Jenny really getting down to serious kissing and fondling in the water. Too Hot! Dana saw her opportunity to be alone with Beth and she grasped it. Tackfully slipping away from the crowd and following the unsuspecting Beth to the babies room. “ Isn’t she sweet lying there?” Dana said startling Beth. “How long have you been standing there?” Beth asked as she turned around surprised. “not long” Dana replied and added “she’s a darling isn’t she?” “yes she is” Beth smiled proudly. The alcohol in her head. She smiled warily at Dana. “You seem tried, why don’t you sit a little and I’ll just rob your shoulders for you” Dana offered. Beth was a little tight in the muscles and really felt she could do with the little massage.


Party was in full gear now and everyone was in the pool except Carmen and Tina who stood by just looking on. Carmen trying to hide the hurt and jealousy and Tina just enjoying herself knowing that Beth was in the house looking after the baby. She was the luckiest woman she smiled to herself. To have such a responsible and loving mate as her companion. Dana caressed Beth’s shoulders slowly, Massaging each muscle group Beth closing her eye letting herself go enjoying it then Dana makes her move she starts to caress the sides of Beth’s back. Beth does not stop her. Dana face comes close to Beth ear whispers something. Beth freezes in shock as Dana kisses Beth’s ear lobes. “What are you do-doing?” Beth protests. “I love you Beth, I have always loved you.” Dana confesses. “ You know I can’t return that love. I have a family.” Beth protests. “ I know but I can’t help myself. Can you blame a girl for trying?” “ What about your girlfriend Dana?” Beth asks. “Beth, I don’t know what is happening to me, but all I can think of is you.” Dana voice quivers.


Tina takes up her drink “I’m going to look in on my two favourite women in the world.” She says as she excuses herself from Carmen’s company. The girl’s in the pool are all exsorsted. Two by two they start to exit the pool tired, wet and naked finding their way to the outside shower and towels. Carmen walks to the pile of towel handing the girls but when shane smiling comes to Carmen for Carmen to hand her a towel too Carmen turns and hands Jenny a towel instead her face serious while she give Jenny a terrible look. “I want to have a word with you” Carmen says to Jenny. Jenny and Carmen walk to a lonely spot “What was that all about? The scene in the pool, thing?” “I thought it would be nice to try a group thing, you know.” “And was it?” “I don’t know?” “You ok with that?” “If you must know, I’m not.” Carmen looked at Jenny. “I’m sorry, Carmen but I thought if I had loosen up. You’d show Shane your true feeling.” “What?” Carmen said in disgust. “What are you talking about?” “I know you love Shane, why can’t you admit it?” “don’t you think that is too much of a bold statement? Jenny, don’t you get it I want to make it with you. Shane is a lose cannon. She out of control. It will never work.” “Oh then you have considered Shane.” “Is that’s what this is all about, you feel that I might hurt you, leave you for Shane?” Carmen looked at Jenny. Jenny nodded her head. “I won’t hurt you Jenny.”


“Beth?” Tina came into the baby’s room. Beth and Dana froze. “What’s going on here?” Tina looked puzzled. “Oh Dana and Alice are having problems in their relationship, Dana feels that Alice is cheating on her.” Beth lied. Beth dared not tell Tina what had happened and what Dana had just confessed to her but a short moment ago. Looking at Dana cross eyed. Dana was already in tears so the story seen credible. “Oh that’s just awful.” Tina comforted Dana. The baby cries and saves the day. “Oh Beth she has awaken, she must be hungry. It had been a long discussion between Beth and Tina if they were going to breast feed and it was agreed upon that breast feed was the best feed.


Jenny has a lot to think about what Carmen said to her by the pool how she really wanted to make it with her. Jenny lays on her bed, tired her eyes closing, slowly she falls asleep, she dreams………..

The dream Jenny has ………”THE YOUNG DREAMER”....... Where Jenny dreams that she is the young REBECCA JOHNSON married to a beast man and Carmen is the young girl disguised as ROBERTO RIVAS a young guy, who come to rescue her.) JACK JOHNSON was a wealthy man that had many persons working for him, many yes men and many prostitutes but there was one person whom he valued above everything else even his money, it was his sweet young wife, Rebecca. This lovely sultry lady had two children for him. REBECCA JOHNSON the picture of beauty tall, slender and the loveliest pair of grey green eyes you could ever imagine. She was indeed a sight for sore eyes. JACK JOHNSON was so opposite in every way to this beautiful lady. Are you familiar with the phase “the beauty and the Beast”? The beast truly he was, for he was the darkest most ugly person one could ever imagine. His ugliness didn’t just settle at the surface of his skin it penetrated to the dept of his soul for he was indeed an evil man. A selfish man and a cruel man. How could such a person as himself be so fortunate to have such a beautiful and loving wife? Well it had every thing to do with the money. He had friends in high places, he practically owned the government and he owned persons as well. This man had a big organization and money attracted itself to him like a magnet. I on the other hand worked for him. Young girl given up for dead when he found in my possession a pair of shoes that belonged to him. He cracked his gun in my face and dealt me three bullets to the chest. Luckily as well, I had in my possession a bullet proof vest and luckily I did have it on. What worst can possible happen to me? I shot at blank range in the chest the impact should have shattered my ribcage, lungs and damage my liver but thanks to God it didn’t. With everyone thinking that I was dead I assumed another identity. One of a tall handsome young man named Roberto Rivas I wore grey contacts to conceal my light brown eyes and wore a short curled hairstyle. My new identity gave me courage. I decided to take back from my enemy. As the day was long I robbed Jack Johnson silly. Until the poor man offered all types of bounty on my head. Dead or alive he wanted to catch me. I slipped into windows and let my self out through the front door. I even tapped into his computer system and into his bank accounts and helped myself to some of his. Added a few zeros to the end of my balance and minus a few from his. Believe me when I say I enjoyed spending the brute’s money. I even befriended some of his body guards and got them to join me. No one knew I was a woman and no one was ever going to find out! I was loving the attention and the rich lifestyle. A young tycoon, but I could not stop there I would rob Jack Johnson one more time. This time I’ll make him hurt. His beautiful wife was going to be mine. I knew she did not love him. I knew their marriage was but a show. I knew her father had arranged the marriage. Money had passed and I knew the cruel beast man ill treated his wife. How did I know all this? The moment I looked into her big grey green sad eyes I knew she was going to be mine. It happened one evening as I was making my way carefully into one of the gigantic rooms in his mansion when I had covered my tracts and no one would see me. There she was, our eyes made four…. She didn’t scream or raise an alarm as I thought she would have. She just calmly looked at me. “found what you were looking for?” she asked her voice was like the rippling of a gentle stream. I stood frozen. With a kind of ease seem came close to me and kissed me lightly on the lips. I have been on to you since you first ****** with my husband’s money” she said. I stuttered “so why didn’t you tell him?” “He deserves someone to **** with him the way he ****** with other people.” She said dryly. “You use the word ‘f…k’ so loosely” I observed. “Haven’t you ever heard the word before?” she answered me. ……silence…..then she said breaking the silence “HURRY! GO! He’s coming.” She whispered sternly. And that was the first but not to be the last conversation I’d ever have with her. Now I could not get her off my mind. She could not know that I was really a girl either. I had to be careful not to blow my cover. OK where was I? oh yeh, I knew she was going to be mine. Then she was really mine. I stole her from right under the old man’s noise. She loved her children but they were his too and she wanted her freedom. When I offered that to her, she took it without thinking twice. She’d get her kids but for now, she was content to just be with me. Jack Johnson was outraged when he realized his wife had left him and he did the next obvious thing beefed up his security around his home and children. Every day the children asked for their mother and each day he lied to them. It broke his heart that their mother could just run off and leave them. Which made him even more determined, to find her and maybe even kill her. He vowed if he could not have her, then no one else can. I sat in my gigantic condo thinking hard then she came over to me and kissed my forehead. “Penny for your thought.” I pulled her down to me and kissed her. “No matter what, I always will be here for you.” He’ll never hurt you again. I swear it!” I said . “Do not swear!” she looked at me “You’ll have your children. I stated. “If it comes to it. I will kill him!” “No you will not!” she said most upset “ My children love their father and even though he is an evil man , he does love his children. I can’t take that away from them. Do you understand?” She looked me straight in the eye. “Yes” I said dryly. “Good! Don’t you EVER suggest that again!” When I did not have it on. I kept my dildo in a safe. She must never find it. I had to be very careful. When we made love, it was always with the lights off. Technology was so good my dildo felt like the real thing. I had promised my love that I would get her children and when Jack Johnson beefed up his security I did the same I built an army the only thing though poor soul he knew not that his security was loyal to me for I had befriend them all. No one liked Jack and when the opportunity swung their way they made him pay. He was betrayed by his own head of security I got the children who where very happy to see their loving mother and the old man got a heart attack but not before he came face to face with me his enemy. As for my newly married wife and her children who had grown to love me as time went by we lived with lifes ups and downs I didn’t promise them a rose garden but we were happy and content, and by the way she doesn’t know that I am a woman ……. The dreamer awakes.


pNatashaGarcia
pNatashaGarcia
Latest page update: made by pNatashaGarcia , Sep 19 2010, 10:49 AM EDT (about this update About This Update pNatashaGarcia paragraphing and alignment2 - pNatashaGarcia

12 words added
7 words deleted

view changes

- complete history)
Keyword tags: dreamer dreams If short Story What
More Info: links to this page
There are no threads for this page.  Be the first to start a new thread.